The thesis should meet the significance criteria (third level of the Thesis Pyramid) described by the University of California composition program. I recommend that you check your thesis statement with me via email before you revise your initial draft. Sometimes I am able to provide assistance on the conceptual level before you commit to final language.Your essay should reference a 4 sources, including the primary text, The Odyssey by Homer. Secondary sources must be drawn from the general or scholarly categories. Tabloid sources and blogs are inappropriate for college-level research, as are most tertiary sources, including Wikipedia.