Discuss the idea of self-confidence and how so many people today lack simple confidence to get through the day especially in the world in which we live, with so many crazy things happening from day to day. But going through the experience made you realize that you want to be that source of confidence for other people. Third para: discuss the desire to be an radiologist and the power that they wield with people and the ability to create self confidence throughout their lives; the ability to change their outlook and their perspective. Also discuss all the things you’ve done so far in your life that have helped you to take steps towards achieving that goal. In school Outside school Personal life relationships Fourth paragraph: conclusion where you connect back to the anecdote. Your goal is to stir that emotion in others… a weight off your shoulders.