My professor sent back some revisions that need to be made. They are in the paper on the side. The language of this proposal needs to be qualitative not quantitative language. Example:
1. In the Abstract in the first sentence using the words “examines the effectiveness” is quantitative. Rephrase it to say This study explores social workers’ use of emotional, instrumental, and informational support with persons re-entering society after incarceration.
2. Problem statement- In the first sentence take out “nfluenced positively” that is quantitative wording instead say
3. The completion of the Abstract, Section 1 and Section 2, along with appendices including all recruitment materials (flyers, emails, letters, etc.), interview protocol or instrument(s), and the informed consent document, mark the end of the DSW Research Project Proposal therefore the section 3, 4 and 5 was deleted please update the table of contents.
4. Appendix A – Consent Form list sample question. The sample questions need to be open ended. Instead of saying do you say How do you think or In your experience.
5. Another Appendix need to be added to list at least 10 sample questions.