Literature review, Good LR. You might want to make it more synthesized: for example, say “some studies say X about open banking while others say Y” and then talk about the studies. When it comes to identifying the gap: you have to say something like “to this date, there is no study addressing the impact of open banking for Qatar’s banking industry and this study will…….” Finally, a few more articles (8-10 more) will be best for your actual proposal and MSc thesis. Research questions The research questions should not start with “What”. They must be worded in a way that we can test them and provide a yes or no answer with supportive arguments and analyses for the yes or no answer. Methodology I strongly suggest conducting surveys and interviews too otherwise your thesis will not be strong. Even if you have 2-3 interviews or even if you have an online survey that is completed by bankers or the public (clients) it will give you some evidence that you can base your argument on. Dr. Alperen provided a good background on how to do interviews and how useful they can be. Data I reviewed your data/interview questions and I am sure you agree with me when I say that what you turned in is not sufficient. You need to have many more questions, you need to explain how you will code the response, and as mentioned before you need to also conduct an online survey where you can ask more questions and collect responses from more respondents. Also, you need to mention who are you going to interview and in which institutions inside Qatar. Only in such a case, your project will be feasible. Please pay attention to these comments when you are turning in your final proposal by the end of the semester. these the comment of the doctor about the proposal he also mentioned listing all the issues that Islamic banking have and how open banking will help to solve one or two of these issues please write abstract and conclusion